The Power of Storytelling
For thousands of years humans have been telling stories. From the sketchings on cave walls, from The Epic of Gilgamesh around 2000 BC to different religious texts that circle the Earth. The story is so central to the human experience that one can not separate the story from what it means to be human.
In marketing, one of the huge benefits of telling a story is that people can remember stories better than any other form of marketing. Marketers call this “sticky”: it sticks in peoples minds long after they read or hear it. If you are a Christian, then you already know that Jesus knew the power of storytelling with his parables. Perhaps the greatest marketer to ever live, Claude Hopkins, in 1919, was hired by Schlitz beer to create an ad that would save the company. Indeed, Schlitz was ranked fifteenth in beer sales and was on the verge of closing its doors. Hopkins made a trip to Wisconsin to visit the brewery. He knew that he needed to know more about how their beer was actually made. Hopkins knew that in order to make a profitable ad, he would have to learn as much as possible about the product.The managers at Schlitz gave Hopkins a tour of the brewery and showed him every step of the brewing process. They showed him how deep they had drilled their wells to find the purest water. They explained how the glass sealed rooms kept the water pure, the yeast they used and from where they got it. They explained to Claude Hopkins where the bottles were cleaned, re-cleaned, and sanitized a dozen times.“My God,” Hopkins said, “Why don’t you tell people in your advertising about all these steps you are taking to brew your beer?”But, answered the Schlitz people, “all companies brew their beer about the same way.”“Yes,” Hopkins replied, “but the first one to tell the public about this process will gain a big advantage.”Hopkins then launched an ad campaign for Schlitz that described in detail the company’s step-by-step brewing process for making the beer. Six months later, Schlitz sales exploded and they became the #1 selling beer. Hopkins proved with his ad campaign the power of storytelling marketing If Claude Hopkins was alive today, he would literally dominate Internet marketing.
This is a good example of how marketing that you would think would fail, actually works. Most people would think that someone doesn’t have the time to read a long story and so it is better to not use story telling in your marketing and instead go for the short sales pitch. Who really has the time to read all this?–is what most new marketers think.This is just not true and we can prove that it is not true because of the marketing giants that have gone before us. Hopkins did marketing research on this very topic, he writes: Mail order advertising tells a complete story if the purpose is to make an immediate sale. You see no limitations there on amount of copy. The motto there is, “The more you tell the more you sell.” And it has never failed to prove out so in any test we know. One of the greatest marketers to have ever lived, Ben Hart, has done his own research on this subject. His findings show that his two page sales copy does better than his one page sales copy, and his four page sales copy does better than his two page sales copy. He has even written sales letters that are more than 12 pages long!
I am reminded of a client I had who felt that the sales letter I created for him was just too long to post on his landing page. He took out huge portions of my sales copy and posted the final version on his website. After a few months, I called him to find out how his web sales were doing. He said his sales increased about 10% but was really hoping for more. I recommended that he put the longer sales copy that I wrote for him up. This time he listened to me and did as I instructed. His sales increased 40%. He is a big believer now in using longer sales copy to tell a story.
Perhaps the greatest example of storytelling marketing is the sales letter that literally made the Wall Street Journal. This letter alone brought fame and fortune to the Wall Street Journal. You can take this letter and tweak it to fit your business.
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About those two college classmates, I mention at the beginning of this letter. They graduated from college together and together got started in the business world. So what made their lives in business different? Knowledge. Useful knowledge. And its application.
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By Lance Jepsen author of Profits That Lie Hidden In Your Web Site
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Marketers ignore the power of storytelling at their own peril. The narrative has amazing attributes and can motivate, captivate and create a sense of bonding that other techniques can’t.
Great post!
Hey Terri, You’re oh so right. without a story, sales copy is just that…Sales Copy.
Thanks for posting your coment. Please comeback.
Bob